RatedRex's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[space girl]

Love it. This is a really good piece. I think the black and white colour scheme works extremely well with this picture.

[demon bitch]

The source of light is somewhat unclear. I think you may have been going for top right? Some places like the butt and shoulder have light reflections going elsewhere.

The breasts and butt don't look right. The breasts are just anatomically incorrect, while I think the butt is just strange because you were trying to have the torso turn to the side while the lower half remains facing in the other direction. Look up some breast drawing guides on youtube, essentially they shouldn't be perfectly rounded spheres unless they're being pushed up by something. Also they're connected to the shoulder at the top like a teardrop shape.

The rib-cage area could use more detail/shading to indicate depth and where the body is turning. I think the lack of detail there is what contributes to the body looking connected strange.

Overall I think its a nice drawing though. I really like what you did with the face. The shine on the hair looks nice too. You do shading pretty well as well.

[Afterglow]

Beautiful artwork. Absolutely love the colours and composition. I do think the face looks slightly strange but nevertheless it's a gorgeous illustration. and

[SOD Melandy]

Nice job on the shading with the body. I also like where you're going with the anatomy in this picture. Imagining the spinal chord, I can see a slight S curve which is what you want, it looks quite natural. I also like how you drew the thighs. I personally have some trouble with getting thighs to look right.

Only thing I can think of is to add better texture shadows/highlights to the armor. You should keep in mind that its metallic, completely different from the skin. Therefore light interacts with that surface differently. Also I don't know if its just me but I think it would be even better if you went even darker with the armor. I think higher contrast between the skin and the armor will do more of an evil look.

ZenoStriker responds:

Thanks for the advice. I kinda thought that too, making the armor darker. I was trying to put highlights on the armor, but for some reason on this one I couldn't figure out how to make the shine on the armor look good

[SMUG WENDY - GIF]

Really good looking art! The animation is very smooth too. I love the consistency with the feed on the cellphone.